It's been a while, it's a bit unfortunate that Hedge edited the same song but your video is great as well! I wonder what place you could have gotten now xD
I liked the weight put in the impacts. The scene selection and the pace are awesome but sometimes I think you used too many rough zoom outs, you should add a bit more blur on some of your movements imo. Also, I'm not too fond of the masks with scan pages in the background anymore, it's been a bit overused now. I did enjoy your compositions though, they were well blended in the video.
Good job man!