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 [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )

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MessageSujet: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Sam 9 Juil - 13:31


Thnx Rei' Very Happy
hello everyone
so , this is my Japan expo entry for this year
it ended up as a cdc in the end xDD
this clip actually took from me a while to make it , & i hope that it didn't turned out that bad xD lel
well , this clip's story is all about rin tohsaka that she missed her father after he went to the holy grail war , after 10 years she'll find him killed in a church & everything will end up by avenging her father
i was hoping for making what i can call " the most original amv about fate series " & i think that i achieved this objective for now , even if the edit itself lack a lot of things ( due to my limited experience XD rofl )
in the end i want to thank ReiGami for supporting me to join this contest & to finish this clip , sagiki & kazeshin for the beta testing , & rayVMB & Liar & kurokaze & everyone else for following the project & the support Smile
PS : i would appreciate all the incoming feedbacks ^^
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Music : Hurts - Mercy
Software used : Adobe After effects cs6
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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Sam 9 Juil - 22:00

:gg:
I like iT!! :Elg:


"I don't like oreos" he says. "BOOM" he goes. What a Face
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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Lun 11 Juil - 11:15

For our first try we managed to get into cdc :V
Congratz for the entry mate.
I enjoyed it :3



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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Mar 12 Juil - 21:19

woash!!!!! very awesome work XD, clean edit in after effect, so cool the story and more...
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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Jeu 14 Juil - 18:30

ur best work so far my friend Very Happy
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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Sam 16 Juil - 21:33

Hello!

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i was hoping for making what i can call " the most original amv about fate series " & i think that i achieved this objective for now

Ever heard of Steel Fenders?

That aside, you put a lot of effort in this video but tbh I don't think it really paid off this time. The first things to bother me is the audio which has been a bit overused already and your audio cut is quite terrible.
Then the main problem of the video is how rough it is, the pace is all over the place, once the chorus hits you never chill and make the camera go everywhere. It is very shakey. You really should have slowed down the stream of scenes in this video.
However the fx in themselves were decently implemented, the problem here lies in the editing more than in the purely technical side. Except that your texts are way too plain.

As for the narration, I have absolutely no idea how Saber and the knight got involved in the end. I felt like it wasn't random but I could not really understand so to me it looked a bit out of place to see them fight while seeing flash backs of tohsaka and her father.

So yeah, you probably learned a lot while working on this video so it's all good. For the next one, try focusing a bit more on what the song demands in terms of pace and movements and it should be greater. Keep it up!



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MessageSujet: Re: [Japan Expo 2016] DiGiCyber - Tragic Fate ( CDC )   Dim 17 Juil - 0:04

thanks a lot for yer feedbacks MDL Very Happy
i really appreciate it ^^
i hope that i would do a better job the next year in JE ^^


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