Not bad, it's a nice OPM video. I liked how you used your flares and the overall scene selection is pretty cool.
There are a bit too much zoom outs here and there making some parts looking cheaper for no reason (like around 1:20). Some zooms aren't too accurate as well, typically the one at 1:05.
The fonts needed more work to look really good, but it wasn't a bad idea to try this out. As they are now, though, they still look floaty and out of place.
Good job on this one, keep it up!