if no presentation were made in 48 hours or the last post made by yourself, this topic will be locked.
but i'll make a quick impression:
Spoiler:
- many rotoscopies were coming out of nowhere, it doesn't make your amv better to put these anytime and everywhere, it's a seriously lack of necessity.
- the text (let's go etc...) were not necessary and they felt really "in front" of the scenes, not mixed at all. the M@D sequences were also questionnable.
-"lateral/horizontal push/slide" transitions felt cheap, without any blur on them to make it cleaner, the borders were too much visible.
- the old film effect didn't put any relevance and felt "added".
to sum up: many unnecessary effects, you should make a cleaner one for the next before trying such things.
hellogoodbye
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Sujet: Re: Come on Baby let's go (Black lagoon amv) Mar 3 Juil - 15:22
Nothing to add, anyway welcome here
ooo595 Touriste
Messages : 18 Date d'inscription : 02/07/2012
Sujet: Re: Come on Baby let's go (Black lagoon amv) Mar 3 Juil - 16:10
PBE a écrit:
A presentation on the appropriated topic is a minimum, in every forum, in order to receive feedback.
if no presentation were made in 48 hours or the last post made by yourself, this topic will be locked.
but i'll make a quick impression:
Spoiler:
- many rotoscopies were coming out of nowhere, it doesn't make your amv better to put these anytime and everywhere, it's a seriously lack of necessity.
- the text (let's go etc...) were not necessary and they felt really "in front" of the scenes, not mixed at all. the M@D sequences were also questionnable.
-"lateral/horizontal push/slide" transitions felt cheap, without any blur on them to make it cleaner, the borders were too much visible.
- the old film effect didn't put any relevance and felt "added".
to sum up: many unnecessary effects, you should make a cleaner one for the next before trying such things.
hellogoodbye
Okay not happen again In any case I hope that at least there is something enjoyed it in amv And I will take your constructive On the following next to amv
to Echotrooper:thanks XD
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Sujet: Re: Come on Baby let's go (Black lagoon amv)
Sujet: Come on Baby let's go (Black lagoon amv) 
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