Swords End

Hi guys =D This is my new amv, pls give me your opinion =D

Dl: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=188588
Editor/Author: Raikei [https://www.youtube.com/user/RaikeiEnd]
Song: Story Of The Year - The Dream Is Over
Anime: Fate/ Stay Night - Unlimited Blade Works (Movie)
Category: Action

the rythm's nice most of the time, but i think it should have been smoother when we're in the verses, like more story-driven. cause anybody who hasn't seen UBW won't get a clue.

nothing really harsh to improve, but there's not much more than any other UBW amv.

i suggest you take a look à Fate/Zero, maybe you'll have more material

up to the next!

Overall the rythm was good, but it could have been better sometimes (for example at 0:04 or 0:40 you missed some music beats).
I thought it lacked effects/transiitions sometimes, but actually it didn't really bother me because your AMV is fast-paced.
About the choice of scenes, I think you could use slower scenes during the verses; For example at 1:37, the music changes pace, but you still use the same fight scenes.
Last thing, you should avoid characters talking without any reason like at 1:52 ^^
overall it's a nice action AMV

Thx for the comments =D

+1 @ Satsumayu and PBE (who said I'm lazy?)