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MessageSujet: Just Like In The Movies   Just Like In The Movies Icon_minitimeDim 16 Sep - 15:51

Yo! I thought I should start posting something and I'd love to hear your opinions, tia Wink


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MessageSujet: Re: Just Like In The Movies   Just Like In The Movies Icon_minitimeMar 18 Sep - 12:22

Yop!

Not bad but I didn't really appreciate it for some reasons:

- your editing is quite repetitive (rolls,shakes,glow), it really lacks some interesting transitions or at least a logical editing because most of the time you don't use your transition in the right way, I think especially of the roll like on 13 second in your amv, here you should make a cut or just zoom but not a roll.

-Be careful with the rythm, in some moments, around 1Min20, it's not really good for example.

Ok, nothing really serious, I'm sure you'll do better next time!

Good luck!
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MessageSujet: Re: Just Like In The Movies   Just Like In The Movies Icon_minitimeMer 19 Sep - 12:55

Aye! Finally a comment! Thank you Echotrooper! I was aware of the slide transitions being overused and I wasn't going for anything special with the effects, it was more of a fun boredom edit and to see if I could pull off the story. I will work harder on my next full amvs and mix up my editing a bit Razz So thanks for the big help!
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MessageSujet: Re: Just Like In The Movies   Just Like In The Movies Icon_minitimeVen 21 Sep - 13:18

Echo already pointed out the most important things ^^
I think the zoom/shake/slide effects were interesting but overused. And sometimes the scenes for the slide transitions didn't go so well together (for example 0:28,0:32).
So overall I got the impression that there wasn't much variation on the effects/colors/transitions, even if the technique is good Smile
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