Dernière édition par vipertrixamv le Dim 14 Oct - 0:54, édité 1 fois
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Sam 13 Oct - 11:44
I already commented on youtube , but i'll say it again here ^^
I think the first 30 seconds were a little boring , i know it's a slow part but...i don't know...maybe it's me -_-
1:11 The zoom wasn't that smooth , you could have make it better
2:53 The same here , i think you should have added more blur
I won't say anything about masking because i think it was fine enough
Overall , i like it , very nice amv , i'm waiting for your next one , and as i said before , F*** Youtube view system:p
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Sam 13 Oct - 12:13
I'll give you my opinion when I'll get back a real internet connexion.
Vipertrix Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 95 Date d'inscription : 07/06/2012 Age : 29 Localisation : Nero Team HQ
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Sam 13 Oct - 12:23
Draga a écrit:
I already commented on youtube , but i'll say it again here ^^
I think the first 30 seconds were a little boring , i know it's a slow part but...i don't know...maybe it's me -_-
1:11 The zoom wasn't that smooth , you could have make it better
2:53 The same here , i think you should have added more blur
I won't say anything about masking because i think it was fine enough
Overall , i like it , very nice amv , i'm waiting for your next one , and as i said before , F*** Youtube view system:p
Thx alot for your opinion, next amv ill try not to leave errors where people can pick up !! anyways its good to see you on this forum aswell ^^
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Sam 13 Oct - 13:11
Np bro , good luck
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7153 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 31 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Dim 14 Oct - 11:54
Hey!
It's been a while since I've seen an air gear amv, especially with the first anime and I have to say I liked it! Most transitions were pretty well executed, there were good ideas, it's a nice job.
I'll agree with Draga, the beginning isn't really interesting, too static and it didn't fit the music so well in my opinion. (The scene where Ikki is about to fall with the air treck etc.)
At 2:14 the scene with Kazu bugged me out a little, because it's fighting scenes in the calm part.
2:31 and others, be careful with those transitions where you move the camera with a mask, it's not always got a natural feeling, especially when the scene is static at first.
But yeah it was nice overalls, you did well, good job
Vipertrix Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 95 Date d'inscription : 07/06/2012 Age : 29 Localisation : Nero Team HQ
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Lun 15 Oct - 0:47
MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hey!
It's been a while since I've seen an air gear amv, especially with the first anime and I have to say I liked it! Most transitions were pretty well executed, there were good ideas, it's a nice job.
I'll agree with Draga, the beginning isn't really interesting, too static and it didn't fit the music so well in my opinion. (The scene where Ikki is about to fall with the air treck etc.)
At 2:14 the scene with Kazu bugged me out a little, because it's fighting scenes in the calm part.
2:31 and others, be careful with those transitions where you move the camera with a mask, it's not always got a natural feeling, especially when the scene is static at first.
But yeah it was nice overalls, you did well, good job
Thanks alot MDL for you opinion and advise ^^
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Lun 15 Oct - 13:48
Nothing special to add on what MDL said (lack of rythm in the beginning, problems with some transitions) but yeah, you continue to get better, it's a good thing.
GL for the next, In my opinion you have the skill now to make really interesting amv! I'm waiting for the next one
Vipertrix Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 95 Date d'inscription : 07/06/2012 Age : 29 Localisation : Nero Team HQ
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Mar 16 Oct - 7:25
Echotrooper a écrit:
Nothing special to add on what MDL said (lack of rythm in the beginning, problems with some transitions) but yeah, you continue to get better, it's a good thing.
GL for the next, In my opinion you have the skill now to make really interesting amv! I'm waiting for the next one
merci Echo =D
Satsumayu Ancien Combattant SNK
Messages : 697 Date d'inscription : 20/08/2011 Age : 31 Localisation : Les crêpes. La pluie.
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Dim 21 Oct - 12:15
I don't have much to add The beginning was too slow, especially when you compare it to the rest of the amv. found the transitions were good, but some felt a little wierd , like the feather at 2:19. Overall it was a nice AMV, good luck for the next one
Vipertrix Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 95 Date d'inscription : 07/06/2012 Age : 29 Localisation : Nero Team HQ
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Mer 24 Oct - 11:34
Satsumayu a écrit:
I don't have much to add The beginning was too slow, especially when you compare it to the rest of the amv. found the transitions were good, but some felt a little wierd , like the feather at 2:19. Overall it was a nice AMV, good luck for the next one
ye i was stuck on that scene for some time so i decided to use that feather mask lol anyways thanks for the comment ^^
RoxStar V.I.Phoenix
Messages : 475 Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : BELGIQUE!
Sujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky Jeu 25 Oct - 21:46
bravo, i like your job air gear is not easy for a amv and the mix with the OAV and the old anime is good