[Kyoroichi-NT] Tamashī No Kyōmei

Anime: Soul Eater
Music: Egypt Central - Push Away
Editor: Kyoroichi
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Sorry I had problems with the ending credits
Also Sorry for the bad quality

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Hello!

I liked it, it was nice especially in the beginning except some rough cam moves like 0:20. On the whole, the pace is well managed, but I think that you've lost a bit your marks at the end of the video, I got it you wanted to have a faster rythm than in the first chorus but the transitions were less well thought, some contrary moves (a dezoom then a zoom) appear, so yeah everything looks a bit rougher and less clean (1:44 oO). You reasoned well when you tried to make the end more powerful but be careful to stay on your feet I'd say xD

Anyways, that's still enjoyable and I think it's your best so far if I'm not mistaken so good job!

PS: Yeah that's a pity that the quality is so poor, I think Soul eater is rather easy to find in HD now :/

Thanks MDL I appreciate your criticizm and yes I should have used HD episodes but I had no choice to use 480p episodes for this because my internet was down for quite some time so I had to use the horrible quality but thanks again!

I think MDL said almost everything , just watch out from the lip flap at 2:05 , and for the twitch , sometimes there were too much brightness.

Epic intro xD

I think it would have been a lot better if it was in HD , but well... i understand , anyway , you have done a good job , it's one of the best soul eater amvs that i've ever seen so i'm satisfied from the result

hah thanks but dont classify it as one of the best it isnt :/

It's not in general , i said one of best '' SOUL EATER'' AMVs.

On top of that , there aren't a lot of good soul eaters AMVs that's why xD

Hi !

Avoid basic spicemaster transitions like at 21s and 27s

From 36s to 49s : too much brightness and contrast ! x) Try to be more subtle with light and contrast effects, it's cool but it could ruin the quality if you push them too much.

Transitions at 49s and 50s could be more improved. Are they incrustations ? If you really want to do this kind of transitions, you'd better do some masks ^^'

Try not to overuse transitions with brightness like at 19s.

Actually, I think your light effects and transitions are too intense generally.


Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next clip, see you ^^

thanks for the feedback sky ^^

No problem, I'm trying to give feedback more regulary from now on x)

aha good!!! I would love more feedback from you xD

I have no time to give an opinion very detailed, but good improvement man!

thanks alot adrien YOU TEACHED ME ALOT OF STUFF HAHA!!!

I like it !! Great Job

thanks santana ^^