[Kyoroichi-NT] Assassination [GMV]

Hi!

I didn't really enjoy it, the rythm isn't really good, you have too rough transitions in the beginning for a calm part and then in the chorus the scenes seem really longer, there is action but it's still slow.
And omg, sooooo much fades to black, you should really be careful about that, too much fades to black are just killing your editing.
Another problem is that you cut the song like every 20 seconds and as though some cuts are good, some of them sound really weird especially at 1:03, it just felt wrong, the voice you added too wasn't really expected here.

So yeah, I think you can do better, see you to the next!

Haha yes I definately can, it was made within 1 hour so I guess you can call it an IC vs Myself haha xD thanks for the feedback MDL!

So it was done in only 1 hour? ah that's why , but what happened ? all the members in your team started making GMVs , viper started and now you , and maybe soon another one who knows... xD

Well i agree with MDL , i didn't liked the fades in black with the same footage like 00:15 , you could have changed and put 3 different scenes which fades in black , i think it would have been better.

As MDL said the song cut wasn't that good , and the voice in the end was useless like that , maybe in the end you could add a text with what the voice say , it could have been better , or another way i don't know ^^

The quality isn't that good too cuz there are a lot of AC HD footages on youtube but maybe you had some problems or something like that so it doesn't matter cuz it's a small GMV :p

I have nothing more to say since it's a fast work , what lacks is the action! the action part was slow and what can i say ... it's normal since it's done in 1 hour , we can't expect something epic ^^

Anyway , keep it up , i'm sure you can make MUCH MORE better next time , good luck

haha yea thanks draga ^^