Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Mer 3 Avr - 11:22
This was done all in one night. This is just a basic story of a woman who falls in love with a wolf man and has kids. After the wolf man dies the woman is alone with two kids and she moves to another place. as the kids grew up, their personalities start to change. Then soon the young boy leaves his mother forever.
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Mer 3 Avr - 13:09
Hi!
I liked it overall, it's well edited except some little flaws like some too short fades or the lack of movement in the beginning. But it was a nice job for one night, good job Ah maybe there were too many white flashes too but since you made it in a short amount of time, it's normal you didn't do more transitions I guess
Kisagi Vieux Brigand
Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: Re: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Mer 3 Avr - 17:11
MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hi!
I liked it overall, it's well edited except some little flaws like some too short fades or the lack of movement in the beginning. But it was a nice job for one night, good job Ah maybe there were too many white flashes too but since you made it in a short amount of time, it's normal you didn't do more transitions I guess
Oh, so you thaought the same thing as me. Well I was a bit tired and got lazy, so I rushed a few things and messed up in a few parts. Thanks!
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Sujet: Re: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Jeu 4 Avr - 11:58
Hey!
Not bad but I found it boring, mainly because of the lack of rythm.
Anyway, it was made quickly so I'm sure you can do way better with more time. I'm waiting for your next amv
Kisagi Vieux Brigand
Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: Re: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Jeu 4 Avr - 12:05
Echotrooper a écrit:
Hey!
Not bad but I found it boring, mainly because of the lack of rythm.
Anyway, it was made quickly so I'm sure you can do way better with more time. I'm waiting for your next amv
lol, thanks man!
PBE Sora to Kasai
Messages : 4353 Date d'inscription : 21/07/2010 Age : 33 Localisation : Du 29
Sujet: Re: [TheRedflash66] Our Farewell Ven 5 Avr - 19:25
i'll edit my post in the week-end. i doN,t have much time now.