[DrunkenPonyZ]VirtualLove

                                            Animes:Sword art online & accel world
                                            Editors:MrdrunkenPony&MelanieMurderous
                                            Song:Broken Girl by Matthew West
STREAM:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FsnyY_6fzog                                            DL:https://mega.co.nz/#!TkhihTII!RhkVAndeYW5_3tet81B99ninAe1UiSgnT1VDD6fSqRk

not quite good but we tried at least ;D

Hey !
That poster looks nice, congratz to both of you for rendering a 4minutes video in IronChef xD
But this is the main problem in your vid, that was too long, you didn't make a lot of mistakes but overall this is a bit boring cuz the editing is the same during 4mins and it's lazy to watch until the end, next time try you should try to focus to render something shorter but better I think, keep going guys !

arigato for the opinion we will take it under considaration next time

Hello

Indeed it was WAY too long and static, it's a shame because it wasn't too bad in some parts but you always have a scene that takes ages to finish to ruin the atmosphere you were making.

Also we don't understand what you are trying to show, the fights don't chain together and they come after a romance it seems you couldn't afford to show for +4min long (and that's normal).

So yeah next time, just try to be a little less ambitious and cut your song xD Keep it up

yeah was afraid that maybe would ruin the song and will look bad but thats like an excuse thank you again hakim ;D
and yeah the idea was that the girl in sao part asuna died and kirito is avenging her memorie and accel world part kuroyokihime got damaged and haru tried to avenge her aswell but melanie in her ending had happy end ;D

shatter effect seems odd at 0:13 cause there is still fragment on the screen before the effect finished abruptly. use physics to make them dissapear or a zoom next time.

0:21 actually i don't think it's a good idea to have the anime subs unless you have a reason (story explanation, but it still can be hard to master, i know, i failed it on my BC entry , or trailer). but at least, if you do it, slightly reduce the song volume, cause it melts in a bad way.

0:36 as always you tend to make drastic changes of color environnments with your cuts. at least, make a fade or something to pace this abrupt change of light.

0:53 like MDL said, TOO LONG.

1:28 dat glitch on YT

1:29 you reused the scene from the mask earlier in the hospital (that i didn't liked much in term on body dimension). some flashback COULD have been decent, but it's a quick cut. reconsider this when you reuse scenes.

2:04 long scenes before didn't make it extremely interesting, but the cut through the boy make it worst. people tend to like to see the action, so if the anime don't have the impact of the car, at least go quick to the hospital scenes, not a huge plan for the quy.

otherwise, the verse moment of the hospital felt a bit lacking of intensity for the impact of the song.

at the reduced intensity mode (silver crow costume), it have a decent atmosphere but the scenes when he goes back in the air lacks a lot of beat sync. it looks like one big scene.

end sequence of the photo: if you want to stop the movement, make it with decelleration, not a constant speed and then a rash cut of movement. or keep it all time long and make the video fade to black.



Like the others said: huge lack of impact, a song cut and shorter tracks would have been definitely better. But it was an honest attempt, and know i heard about a new editor i didn't knew as Melanie.



Nota bene: if you want to try the level up, consider seriously to check your scene lights/environnement, cause the cuts really make us out of your clips most of the time.



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