[MEP] Shounen Sekai (31/12/2013)

Editors: 995Gabber, XBerserkDrew, KenshiroAMV
Anime: one pieces film z, magi the labyrinth of magic, fate/stay night, shingeki no kyojin, fairy tail movie, dragon ball z
Song: Neko - Destiny
Contest Participating: Enigma's Time 2nd Edition IC
Description: so hey gais, i participated with 2 freinds of mine from ENP, and we made this mep~~ we ended up scorin 2nd best MEP under tricky and sephi xD and 6th overall xD. so we were quite satisfied lol. we wernt really a fan of the song so we all felt we could have done better, but... this was the only song we felt editable xD. any feedback on our parts would be greatly appreciated and enjoy

parts wise
995Gabber = One Piece Film Z and Fairy Tail movie
XBerserkDrew = Fate/Stay Night and Shingeki No Kyojin
KenshiroAMV = Magi and Dragon Ball Z

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Hey!

Not bad overall, I thought that in the first half of the mep it was quite linear but it becomes better afterwards. Well this song isn't the easiest when it comes to pacing it right. I'll make a track per track

Track 1: I liked it a lot, that was energetic and had some interesting techniques, it's actually my favourite of the mep, good job

Track 2: The beginning had the right tone for the variation of the song. However it soon becomes quite messy, I'll explain: first your scenes are sometimes really short and the cuts you use are what I'd call "hard cuts" so you're always giving the pace a new impulse while I think this part of the song was one of the only one who needed a somehow calmer atmosphere. You also use some really rough cam moves, imo some were unnecessary but almost all of them needed to be smoother, you should use more frames and some radial blurs. I've detailed it a lot compared with the others but that doesn't mean that was all that bad (the scene selection was really nice), but indeed, the high pace of the transitions makes the mep look a bit linear at this point.

Track 3: Not bad at all, I thought some impacts were missing, like at 1:01 for example it needed more power imo. My main complain would be about the way you followed the song, I think the video could have been closer to the song with more impacts. But still cool!

Track 4: That's way better and is one of my favourites ;)You really got the atmosphere of the song here imo. Be careful with your fire masks, they needed more work to look well implemented and also the roll at 1:35 was a bit inconsistent.

Track 5: Nice part which follows well the pace of the song. I just dont understand why you suddenly zoom in at 1:49 and I thought the chorus part was a bit slower than expected. But this final fight is quite weird to edit to so I understand xD

Track 6: A cool part to end the mep! Nothing special to say about this one, except that I thought Krillin and Tien didn't have their place here XD

So yeah overall a nice shonen mep, guys! Good job

Yo !
for me it's good
part i liked : one piece, magi, fairy tail and fate/stay night

i don't know what but some things bother me in the shingeki part
i think it's the rhythm.

in the magi part some camera move are too quick for me.

I liked others parts, good job

Good MEP guys !

Good job for second place   
I liked it !

MagicDarkLight a écrit:

Track 2: The beginning had the right tone for the variation of the song. However it soon becomes quite messy, I'll explain: first your scenes are sometimes really short and the cuts you use are what I'd call "hard cuts" so you're always giving the pace a new impulse while I think this part of the song was one of the only one who needed a somehow calmer atmosphere. You also use some really rough cam moves, imo some were unnecessary but almost all of them needed to be smoother, you should use more frames and some radial blurs. I've detailed it a lot compared with the others but that doesn't mean that was all that bad (the scene selection was really nice), but indeed, the high pace of the transitions makes the mep look a bit linear at this point.

wow thnx for this it was indpeth and just wot i needed xD. ill work on this thnx

and thnx for the other coments guys xD, my partners appreciate it very much ^^