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Basicly testing 60FPS and twixtor overall, what do you think I should improve?

I think that you should concentrate on the basics before "testing" things that are less needed.

Actually, I found hard to follo your synch beacause in my mind that was not the music's one.
You need to work on your fluidity too : many of the movements, added or not, were interrupted with a scene change because the next scene was too static or had a movement completly different. Try to coordonate them and you'll found out that your clip will be more dynamic and fluid.

Your lip synchs should be improved too.

Try to focus on those points instead of twitches, twixtor, 60fps or whatever is not necessary to make a good AMV, that's my advice ^^

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however this is only your opnion, therefore I must say rather than this test you should watch my other videos, but I guess I'm not allowed to say anything to a critic x'D

D4RKAMV a écrit:

however this is only your opnion, therefore I must say rather than this test you should watch my other videos, but I guess I'm not allowed to say anything to a critic x'D

of course you can, just that you asked opinion about this amv only (since there was no "you can look at my other vids to compare") in the topic, so skydean made the OP about this one.



Now! about this amv:

i haven't felt any huge issue about your twix/60fps test, so we can say it wasn't a problem.

but like skydean said, your fx tests doesn't seem to adorn your main scene choices, cause some lip sync felt off-track .

i'll agree on the fluidity too: for example , just after 0:46 (which had a very good scene choice/cut from normal to cat-girl), the cat-girl says kinda static in foetal position, and then BAM , we go in a white background. a little dezoom during the cat-girl scene, added to a "whitening" transition ( the one which suits best) could have made something more fluid to the eye. OR even a "negative" effect on the clocks scene right after, you could have made her "fade/drown" inside a black transition and then put your "negatived" clock scene.


It should already help your next vids a lot, cause your future tests will polish your enhanced basics.
Well then, hope it will helps.

If you need any beta-tests about Making-of, feel free to call me !

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Skydean a écrit:

I think that you should concentrate on the basics before "testing" things that are less needed.

Actually, I found hard to follo your synch beacause in my mind that was not the music's one.
You need to work on your fluidity too : many of the movements, added or not, were interrupted with a scene change because the next scene was too static or had a movement completly different. Try to coordonate them and you'll found out that your clip will be more dynamic and fluid.

Your lip synchs should be improved too.

Try to focus on those points instead of twitches, twixtor, 60fps or whatever is not necessary to make a good AMV, that's my advice ^^

Exactly this

Bigalaxy a écrit:

Moi je vais work mon anglais xD.

your english is better than my french. don't worry  

Skydean a écrit:

I think that you should concentrate on the basics before "testing" things that are less needed.

Actually, I found hard to follo your synch beacause in my mind that was not the music's one.
You need to work on your fluidity too : many of the movements, added or not, were interrupted with a scene change because the next scene was too static or had a movement completly different. Try to coordonate them and you'll found out that your clip will be more dynamic and fluid.

Your lip synchs should be improved too.

Try to focus on those points instead of twitches, twixtor, 60fps or whatever is not necessary to make a good AMV, that's my advice ^^

je suis d'accord

Okay, guys, let him talk xD

D4RKAMV, if by chance you see this, you CAN tell me if you think I'm wrong or if you agree with what I said.
Feel free to say anything you want but doing it with calm and respect would be of great help if you want me to understand something I didn't or to change my mind about this AMV.

I'm not saying that you lacked those things but if you seriously wanted to convince me, throwing a "but I guess I'm not allowed to say anything to a critic x'D" at me is not the right way to do it.

Hope that I won't be misunderstood.