AMV Name: Burning Heart Author: Sebacarp Song: Bring me the horizon - Sleepwalking Anime: SAO, Accel World D/L: http://www.mediafire.com/download/t69v8z666c5klfx/Sebacarp+-+AMV+Burning+Heart.mp4 Special Thanks: MagicDarkLight and Echotrooper.
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Glad we could help, too bad you didn't make it to the finals... I think the idea of your amv is nice, easy to understand and not too badly executed. You definitely need more technique for some aspects though, notably more smoothness in cam moves and more clever masks.
But the main focus now is the pace, it's the biggest problem of your amv, some parts really felt dull because they were too slow, either scenes are too long or they are too static when the song wants more impact. The first chorus with this screamo part is the clearest example. I can only guess that the concept tied you up with scenes so it is understandable, still I believe it could be better.
Keep it up, you can make cool things in the future I think
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Hey! I already said what I thougt about your amv and what could have been improve! Overall it's not bad at all but as MDL said there are still flaws that you have to correct on your next project! Too bad for the finals but don't worry, next year you'll do better!
Sebacarp Touriste
Messages : 17 Date d'inscription : 14/01/2014 Age : 34 Localisation : Argentina