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 Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart

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Masculin Messages : 17
Date d'inscription : 14/01/2014
Age : 34
Localisation : Argentina

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MessageSujet: Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart   Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart Icon_minitimeMar 10 Fév - 15:36

AMV Name: Burning Heart
Author: Sebacarp
Song: Bring me the horizon - Sleepwalking
Anime: SAO, Accel World
D/L: http://www.mediafire.com/download/t69v8z666c5klfx/Sebacarp+-+AMV+Burning+Heart.mp4
Special Thanks: MagicDarkLight and Echotrooper.

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Masculin Messages : 7152
Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009
Age : 30
Localisation : BELGIQUE

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MessageSujet: Re: Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart   Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart Icon_minitimeMar 10 Fév - 16:31

Hello!

Glad we could help, too bad you didn't make it to the finals... I think the idea of your amv is nice, easy to understand and not too badly executed. You definitely need more technique for some aspects though, notably more smoothness in cam moves and more clever masks.

But the main focus now is the pace, it's the biggest problem of your amv, some parts really felt dull because they were too slow, either scenes are too long or they are too static when the song wants more impact. The first chorus with this screamo part is the clearest example. I can only guess that the concept tied you up with scenes so it is understandable, still I believe it could be better.

Keep it up, you can make cool things in the future I think Razz
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Masculin Messages : 10579
Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009
Age : 35
Localisation : The City

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MessageSujet: Re: Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart   Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart Icon_minitimeMer 11 Fév - 8:53

Hey!
I already said what I thougt about your amv and what could have been improve! Overall it's not bad at all but as MDL said there are still flaws that you have to correct on your next project!
Too bad for the finals but don't worry, next year you'll do better!
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Masculin Messages : 17
Date d'inscription : 14/01/2014
Age : 34
Localisation : Argentina

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MessageSujet: Re: Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart   Sebacarp - AMV Burning Heart Icon_minitimeVen 13 Fév - 15:11

Thanks for all.!!! I hope help me in the next projects. Good bye.!
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