[Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC]

Hey everyone, i made this for EST IC, I know i can do better thats why i am posting it up here to hear your reviews...^_^
Don't hold back!



DL: www.mediafire.com/watch/45ia6djlo5d5q4x/[Koyomi]_Lonely_Dance.mp4

HI!

I have no time to make a big review but it's pretty nice overall! You have nice transitions and you follow the rythm pretty well! Maybe next time try to do an effort on the particular sounds in the music like scratch, voice distortions and try to illustrate them with FX on the screen!

Good luck for the ranking!

Thanks a lot, i will take that into consideration...:')

Hello,

This is not too bad but the scenes look slowed down A LOT. The framerate looks really low and that's annoying. Transitions are good but nothing out of the standard and the main problem is the end of your amv, well basically there's no end, I don't know about the original song but I think you should have thought of ending it in another way.

It felt incomplete and your ranking ended quite low but it's mainly because of this problem of "slowed down" scenes (even if they weren't, I don't really know) and the ending, the editing in itself wasn't bad. So good job and I'm looking forward to your next work.

Thanks a lot i really appreciate your thoughts....xD
and yes the song did end that way...D:
never the less i should have tried to fixed it more appropriately....
but really thank you for your comment...:3