iPa1nKun
Touriste
 Messages : 2
Date d'inscription : 15/02/2016
Age : 27
![[iPa1nKun&Renner] Wreck! Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) |  Sujet: [iPa1nKun&Renner] Wreck! ![[iPa1nKun&Renner] Wreck! Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/icon_minitime.gif) Lun 15 Fév - 20:36 | |
| Yo! This is my first upload on yt! This is work with my bro Renner! We make it in 6 hours! I hope you like it!^^ DLL: https://mega.nz/#!eI0SxbZL!rkNja5Q29T7eCHDnRIBWrUuPgn1LTpEftKLkYW6rQ-8 | |
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Kisagi
Vieux Brigand
Messages : 231
Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013
Age : 27
Localisation : Gifu, Japan
| | Sujet: Re: [iPa1nKun&Renner] Wreck! Lun 15 Fév - 22:52 | |
| The editing is not bad, but I really don't like the fact that it's all openings | |
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Tricky
Sora to Kasai
Messages : 2261
Date d'inscription : 31/05/2009
Age : 30
Localisation : Chez Adrien Heraud
| | Sujet: Re: [iPa1nKun&Renner] Wreck! Sam 20 Fév - 20:57 | |
| Not bad, but as Kisagi said it's only overused openings, try to make something moe original next time  | |
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