[Liar] The one who laughs last

This is my AMV for the Nijikon contest that took place in my country. I tried to create a story related to Emiya Shiro and Kiritsugu, but then the fast part comes and kills the 'story' i tried to make... On the fast part I focused more on Sync and Flow, trying to create a rhythm on it.
The video is from Nov. but my basics on edits are kinda the same and i want to see what you pros think about it. Enjoy.
- Animes: Fate stay and zero
- Music: Downplay - The one who laughs last

Hello!
Not bad but it does feel a bit random after all the build up on the Emiya family in the beginning. Also, I think the color correction is too dark, sometimes it's hard to make out what's going on.
In terms of pace management, the part at 1:45 feels a bit too fast for the song, the rhythm is a bit unstable here and your chorus could have had more impact overall.
Well that's an old video though

Thanks!
I'm bad at color correction and i hope that my editing skills are better now . I want to say that my Japan expo edit will show my progress from then but... it's hard to say that ...
I want to see your opinion on my next edit :3