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 [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed

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Kioyshi
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Masculin Messages : 13
Date d'inscription : 01/02/2021
Age : 27

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MessageSujet: [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed   [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed Icon_minitimeMar 8 Juin - 8:56

Hi, my first full job at IC. Made in 24h for the Daiguren IC. I wanted to do a lot of things, but I didn't have time. Hope you enjoy it, enjoy your viewing)

Anime: Jujutsu Kaisen
Song: ALESTI - Paralyzed (feat. James DeBerg)

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ZarKos
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Masculin Messages : 61
Date d'inscription : 24/07/2018
Age : 24
Localisation : Laugh Tale

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MessageSujet: Re: [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed   [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed Icon_minitimeMar 8 Juin - 13:27


Hi Kiyoshi ! Very Happy

It looks really cool for 24h, it's clean overall ! Some things looks useless like lights/leaks overlay or particles/ink a little bit dirty (51s, 1'39 etc...) and overall i felt a lack of rythm especially before the drop of the song for example : 56/58s > statics scenes + fade ruined it. But we also have cool parts like the lips (1'32) or the drop (2'14) who were pretty enjoyable.

Good job for your rank and your amv that was cool, just pay attention to rythm/dynamism next time and it will be so much better (with more time too) !
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Kioyshi
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Masculin Messages : 13
Date d'inscription : 01/02/2021
Age : 27

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MessageSujet: Re: [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed   [Jujutsu Kaisen AMV] - Paralyzed Icon_minitimeMar 8 Juin - 14:37

ZarKos a écrit:

Hi Kiyoshi !  Very Happy

It looks really cool for 24h, it's clean overall ! Some things looks useless like lights/leaks overlay or particles/ink a little bit dirty (51s, 1'39 etc...) and overall i felt a lack of rythm especially before the drop of the song for example : 56/58s > statics scenes + fade ruined it. But we also have cool parts like the lips (1'32) or the drop (2'14) who were pretty enjoyable.

Good job for your rank and your amv that was cool, just pay attention to rythm/dynamism next time and it will be so much better (with more time too) !
Hey ZarKos! Thank you for showing me my mistakes, next time I will take into account everything that you told me.
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