LightAMV - reiatsu

the video is actually 3 months old now and not so good xD well i am still a noob editor sorry for the stupid gliches and the shit AE. i got really lazy at the end xD

Negatives:
- The Renders at first I found it not very suitable.
- The logos should be avoided, you have to blur the next time or use of the episodes in RAW.
- Made gaffe too, sometimes you have the characters talking in a vacuum.
- Your rotoscopies, you have to blur a bit too (especially the edges).
- 1min41sc, the texts that appear at once in the middle also be avoided, it is too hard and it's a bit useless.
You'll have the overlay in the personal example, in the rotoscopiant!
- 1min51sc, your After Effects 3D plane, it is damn good but again I find it a bit pointless, your basic installation is correct, suddenly it just staple the thing .. I think we're away!
- In the end I think it loses sync, can be seen from the many flash effects!

Strengths:
- The sync is about right except the end!
- You follow the pace pretty well for a start, it's really not bad!
- Some well executed transitions (transitions of eyes etc.) ..
- Also some really nice zoom and many bumps!


Well, the other will tell you more, but for a start it's really not bad, I think you could fast forward with the hard work = D!
The next time;).

Jamel Debbouze a écrit:

Negatives:
- The Renders at first I found it not very suitable.
- The logos should be avoided, you have to blur the next time or use of the episodes in RAW.
- Made gaffe too, sometimes you have the characters talking in a vacuum.
- Your rotoscopies, you have to blur a bit too (especially the edges).
- 1min41sc, the texts that appear at once in the middle also be avoided, it is too hard and it's a bit useless.
You'll have the overlay in the personal example, in the rotoscopiant!
- 1min51sc, your After Effects 3D plane, it is damn good but again I find it a bit pointless, your basic installation is correct, suddenly it just staple the thing .. I think we're away!
- In the end I think it loses sync, can be seen from the many flash effects!

Strengths:
- The sync is about right except the end!
- You follow the pace pretty well for a start, it's really not bad!
- Some well executed transitions (transitions of eyes etc.) ..
- Also some really nice zoom and many bumps!


Well, the other will tell you more, but for a start it's really not bad, I think you could fast forward with the hard work = D!
The next time;).

thanks for the feedback ^^ i'll try to learn from my mistakes

i'll comment it tonight. gotta do some things first which bugs me...

I totally agree with Akuzo Jamel Debbouze so my opinion will be short ^^.

First all you should get rid of the logo on the episodes.(you can crop it with virtual dub for example)
I found that the main problem is that you used too many static scenes, you should add some movement to them so that it flows better. But overall the sync is good (even if it lacks sometimes) and there was nice zoom transitions

Satsumayu a écrit:

I totally agree with Akuzo Jamel Debbouze so my opinion will be short ^^.

First all you should get rid of the logo on the episodes.(you can crop it with virtual dub for example)
I found that the main problem is that you used too many static scenes, you should add some movement to them so that it flows better. But overall the sync is good (even if it lacks sometimes) and there was nice zoom transitions

thanks ^^