Messages : 6504 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 23 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi] Akushon Pakku! Dim 10 Fév - 18:00
Yo man! For a little amv done in 8 hours it looked nice xD Some cool transitions, well the pace at the end could have been better imo but ok
What I disliked was the shakes after some zooms, they were tooo strong, hence not natural at all (example 0:13) And the border around 1:45 is too big, it takes too much of the screen for me, maybe you should lower the opacity too.
Messages : 86 Date d'inscription : 10/12/2012 Age : 28
Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi] Akushon Pakku! Sam 16 Fév - 0:01
Not too bad for rhythm AND GENERAL CHOICE...but there is a cliche, yes, a cliche and it is the one in which the character of action anime are just doing that are seein common in action amvs...various idea is good but we know everything (execpt in con), why not trying something new?
Beside this, amv is cool!!!
Soyez le changement que vous voulez voir dans le monde Gandhi
Messages : 86 Date d'inscription : 07/02/2011 Age : 21 Localisation : Blois; Centre; (41)
Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi] Akushon Pakku! Sam 16 Fév - 23:54
It was cool in all, as MDL said. But your impacts were bad. Also your twitch effect at 55 seconds was kinda useless. Your flashes were kinda used so much on some scenes where were don't need. From 1:43 to 1:55 the edges weren't fit with the actual scene, 'cause Blue with Brown seems like not really clean. Have fun.