[Sajid] AMV - Survive

Well, this is my first time posting my work on the forums. Mostly because I'm quite lazy to make long videos xD


P.S. I'd be really happy if anyone wants to become my amv teacher XD

dude for a 6 hours it's actually quite good !


but main thing i noticed is sometimes the scene choice feels odd, sometimes you use a lot of epic scenes during the verse that i think could have got more impact placing it at the best moments of the music. And we understand nothing at all, like a classic shonen style. Not that it's bad, but it lacks some "surprise" in the editing. but you put a lot of effort in rotos and masks for a 6 hours. you seem efficient.

keep it up, and don't be afraid to try more than 1:30 amvs.

PBE a écrit:

dude for a 6 hours it's actually quite good !


but main thing i noticed is sometimes the scene choice feels odd, sometimes you use a lot of epic scenes during the verse that i think could have got more impact placing it at the best moments of the music. And we understand nothing at all, like a classic shonen style. Not that it's bad, but it lacks some "surprise" in the editing. but you put a lot of effort in rotos and masks for a 6 hours. you seem efficient.

keep it up, and don't be afraid to try more than 1:30 amvs.

Thanks for the feedback bro. I also think I have problems with scene selections :/ But yeah I guess I did try hard to do those stuff in 6 hours xD

You finally posted something here you fucking lazy! Hi bro!

As i told you , it's really nice and you're improving , and now you're used to rotoscoping so it´s cool , i can't comment in details because i don't have a pc right now ( you know why) :p

Anyway , keep it up , and maybe MDL will pass here and give you better comment because he comment here very often , and PBE said many things , i'm not that good but i you want some advices or something else you know my skype / FB and i can help when i get my pc back ^^

Keep it up bro ! I'm looking forward to your full amv ( this isn't a full yet :p)

Draga a écrit:

You finally posted something here you fucking lazy! Hi bro!

As i told you , it's really nice and you're improving , and now you're used to rotoscoping so it´s cool , i can't comment in details because i don't have a pc right now ( you know why) :p

Anyway , keep it up , and maybe MDL will pass here and give you better comment because he comment here very often , and PBE said many things , i'm not that good but i you want some advices or something else you know my skype / FB and i can help when i get my pc back ^^

Keep it up bro ! I'm looking forward to your full amv ( this isn't a full yet :p)

lol hey Nour! Thanks for your comment. I'll try to make a full amv soon but I just don't have much luck with full amvs xD

And well, I guess I will wait for MDL to pass by

So I have this kind of reputation already xD I guess it's normal though xD
Hi, nice to see you posted here, as I told you already I think it was quite cool, a clean work with quite a nice rythm management, cool transitions so yeah it's quite solid already.

I don't really agree with what PBE said, well yeah it may have found it a little boring because of all the action scenes everywhere but you did make a calm part and I actually felt the variations quite well. Maybe it would have been easier with a longer project but it's also true that we're quite familiar with actiony katanagatari amvs so in a way the lenght is not a bad thing here

What's put me a little off were some cam' moves, they're aren't rubbish but they're far from perfect and some of them were quite bothering.
0:24, don't zoom anywhere just to zoom, there you zoomed at the right of the character and then you dezoom somehow around its hips, cohesion is important.
Same at 0:26, 0:41,
At 0:30 it's a far better way of using it, you did it well here.
1:06 not good because you chained a zoom right after a dezoom, it's breaking the move.

So yeah that's pretty much all I have to say here. I'm looking forward to seeing a longer amv of yours with maybe more ambition, I think you have all the cards in hand to show us awesome projects so keep it up man!

MagicDarkLight a écrit:

So I have this kind of reputation already xD I guess it's normal though xD
Hi, nice to see you posted here, as I told you already I think it was quite cool, a clean work with quite a nice rythm management, cool transitions so yeah it's quite solid already.

I don't really agree with what PBE said, well yeah it may have found it a little boring because of all the action scenes everywhere but you did make a calm part and I actually felt the variations quite well. Maybe it would have been easier with a longer project but it's also true that we're quite familiar with actiony katanagatari amvs so in a way the lenght is not a bad thing here

What's put me a little off were some cam' moves, they're aren't rubbish but they're far from perfect and some of them were quite bothering.
0:24, don't zoom anywhere just to zoom, there you zoomed at the right of the character and then you dezoom somehow around its hips, cohesion is important.
Same at 0:26, 0:41,
At 0:30 it's a far better way of using it, you did it well here.
1:06 not good because you chained a zoom right after a dezoom, it's breaking the move.

So yeah that's pretty much all I have to say here. I'm looking forward to seeing a longer amv of yours with maybe more ambition, I think you have all the cards in hand to show us awesome projects so keep it up man!

Yay MDL xD

Thanks a lot for the detailed opinion. I will improve those stuff and I will definitely post my future works here XD