Trik II
Touriste
Messages : 10
Date d'inscription : 31/12/2013
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MagicDarkLight
Sora to Kasai
 Messages : 7147
Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009
Age : 30
Localisation : BELGIQUE
| | Sujet: Re: [TRIK II] - I'm Picky Sam 25 Jan - 20:48 | |
| Hello! It's not bad overall, imo you could have easily been in the finalists  Overall it was quite cool, there are some transitions. However I really think you used too many pushes without thinking so much about them, because there are a lot that look incoherent, if scenes don't really fit for a push, then most of the time it's better to avoid it. Also, I thought that the variations of pace weren't obvious enough. Anyways, good job and good luck in the contest, it's not over yet  | |
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