First. I don't like it... (I've seen too much VIDS like dat... way too much....) song was borring/overused )but I'm not blaming you for that.
now about the begging, it started quite good to be honest it got some what build up however when the actual beat started it became random however is not bad for an ic.
at 00:57 I don't like that transition, the scenes are so diffrent and didn't flow good with eachother and those zooms after that are just illogical/diffren't from each other. why do you make an zoom when the 2 scenes have diffrent motion, you used some leaf,flower etc transitions ALOOT and to be honest I think they are so out of place ( it would be better if you didn't use them at all ) those film looks overlays are overused and rly didn't flow well with the actual scenes for example you should add some sort of an color blurs anything to make them flow better, and don't use them for timing/impact sake... there are more things I didn't like but overall I think you improved so gg for that!
/ gl with the IC /
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