This isn't too bad but the inspirations are too obvious. You should try your own stuff instead of trying your best to do the same as many others. Still I liked the energy you put in it.
But most of your calm parts are overlooked and make the chorus feel weak. The only good calm part was at 1:55, otherwise it's usually too fast-paced.
To be complete, I should add the association is quite weird, the song is a bit too generic for TG imo.
Keep it up