Attack On Titan「AMV」- I Will Live

Hello ^^ This is my latest AMV i Would love to know your opinion about it please ( the colors - the transitions... )

Hello!

There are many problems but it will be better with more experience. First of all, you want to get rid of the logo in the top right corner that appears from time to time.
The transitions are a bit too rough, they should be smoother and more logical. For example when you zoom, you need to use at least 4 frames and blurs and the likes to get a better output.
I can see your efforts to pace everything right but it's still a bit all over the place. Especially the beginning with all those flashing images and effects, it should have been calmer imo.

keep it up o/

MagicDarkLight a écrit:

Hello!

There are many problems but it will be better with more experience. First of all, you want to get rid of the logo in the top right corner that appears from time to time.
The transitions are a bit too rough, they should be smoother and more logical. For example when you zoom, you need to use at least 4 frames and blurs and the likes to get a better output.
I can see your efforts to pace everything right but it's still a bit all over the place. Especially the beginning with all those flashing images and effects, it should have been calmer imo.

keep it up o/

Thanks bro for your opinion i really appreciate that. i'll try to use this tips for my next AMV