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MessageSujet: Trauma   Sam 28 Oct - 18:30



A sad AMV about One Piece. I hope u like it (:

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MessageSujet: Re: Trauma   Dim 29 Oct - 17:16

Hello!

Fun concept for a One Piece amv. However, I felt like the AMV was mainly wrapping up all the sad parts of the anime with no real link between them. It would have been cool to have a deeper reflexion on the atmosphere you wanted to create.

On the technical side, I think your color corrections were usually too much over the top and the blurs were especially intrusive. I know it was kinda needed to alter the overall atmosphere but the wash-out effect was too present imo.

The rest of the editing was quite good in its own, the song is respected, so yeah, in conclusion it's ok but needed a bit more restraint on the color changes and more reflexion on the scene selection.

Keep it up!




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MessageSujet: Re: Trauma   Dim 29 Oct - 18:09

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hello!

Fun concept for a One Piece amv. However, I felt like the AMV was mainly wrapping up all the sad parts of the anime with no real link between them. It would have been cool to have a deeper reflexion on the atmosphere you wanted to create.

On the technical side, I think your color corrections were usually too much over the top and the blurs were especially intrusive. I know it was kinda needed to alter the overall atmosphere but the wash-out effect was too present imo.

The rest of the editing was quite good in its own, the song is respected, so yeah, in conclusion it's ok but needed a bit more restraint on the color changes and more reflexion on the scene selection.

Keep it up!
Thx for ur opinion ^^ yeah, I had to put more clips about Rufy and Ace to better understand the plot I wanted to build.. with the next amv I'll be more attentive
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