[NT_AMV] Alexei - E.I.

Dl [720p]: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=189295
Title: Echo Impact
Author: Alexei

I'm not very good but I'm trying to improve xD
I would like to form your own opinion

Hey!

Not bad, I liked it, though you do many lip flaps or maybe it's actually lips but they are so many that it's not really relevant anymore. So yeah try not to abuse of this and by the way when you make Asuka sing it doesn't really have a great effet because she's a girl and the singer's a guy XD So yeah that's a point you should care about.

Apart from that sometimes there are some beats you're missing because you let flow a scene too long, it doesn't arrive so much but sometimes like 00:24 I think you should have made the scene a little shorter.

And last thing I'll say is about the cam moves, you do some "zoom dezoom" like the part from 1:35 till 1:38, it's breaking the moves because you do contrary movements, you should try to keep one direction for this kind of stuff.

But anyways I liked it, good job man

MagicDarkLight a écrit:

Hey!

Not bad, I liked it, though you do many lip flaps or maybe it's actually lips but they are so many that it's not really relevant anymore. So yeah try not to abuse of this and by the way when you make Asuka sing it doesn't really have a great effet because she's a girl and the singer's a guy XD So yeah that's a point you should care about.

Apart from that sometimes there are some beats you're missing because you let flow a scene too long, it doesn't arrive so much but sometimes like 00:24 I think you should have made the scene a little shorter.

And last thing I'll say is about the cam moves, you do some "zoom dezoom" like the part from 1:35 till 1:38, it's breaking the moves because you do contrary movements, you should try to keep one direction for this kind of stuff.

But anyways I liked it, good job man

Thx so much man is in fact full of stupid mistakes, I will try to be there closer, thanks again

Wow, nero team, one more

Not bad as MDL said, there are no big mistakes but it lacks some "awesome" transition or editing.
About the main mistakes, I won't say again what MDL said

Anyway, I found it interesting, you have some potential, go ahead!

Echotrooper a écrit:

Wow, nero team, one more

Not bad as MDL said, there are no big mistakes but it lacks some "awesome" transition or editing.
About the main mistakes, I won't say again what MDL said

Anyway, I found it interesting, you have some potential, go ahead!

Thx so much Echo

I commented on it tomorrow;)

buenas noche:


it wasn't boring to watch. just some scene time gestion i disliked : "like 0:24 when he takes times to push a lever(like MDL said) and right after at 0:27, really fast scenes like the orb and the strategist . the timer at 1:36 too. well , i think you get the point. ^^

but i liked some color corrections you made, they weren't felt unnecessary. loved the end of the first chorus, good ambiance.


i'll be waiting for the next one !

i like de red/green moment at 1min07


^^

that was nice

Thx to all for the comment guys

As MDL said , there are a lot of lip synch , you abused a little so it kills the flow at some points ^^

Watch out from the scenes you choose too , sometimes it's long , and sometimes too fast , if it's too fast , we can barely see anything and if it's long it'll be boring and it'll kill the flow , so try to improve that :p

As echo said , you miss some awesome transitions , try to add more mask transitions (rotoscoping) to have a better flow and a variaty of transitions ( cuz sometimes you use only twitch for that and we'll say it's the easy trick ^^)

Anyway , it wasn't bad , you have some potential so go ahead and i'm sure you'll make something better next time

Like MDL already said, some lips were weird (like the Asuka one at 0:36).
And I didn"t like the scene at 1:01 (I mean, why does that girl randomly appears between the EVA fighting scenes xD ?).
Finally, the rythm could have been better, especially in the fisrt part of the video.

But it was a nice watch but like Echo said, it lacked of something really awesome. I really like the part beginning at 1:10 though