The wings of the raven [Alexei]

My new amv guys, I give your opinion pls

Anime: Karas
Song: Breaking Benjamin - Dance With The Devil
DL: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=189477

Already a new one? xD

Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure

You could have make it longer :p

1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want.

As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!!

Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one

Draga a écrit:

Already a new one? xD

Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure

You could have make it longer :p

1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want.

As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!!

Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one

Thank you Draga yes, I know I have to put in some transition mask xD also because I love them, anyway thanks for the compliments and for the support

Stop being lazy and just do it! hhhhhh , np bro

Not bad, yeah that looks more interesting than your last one.

I think the beginning is pretty dark, I don't know if it's the anime or else but I didn't really know what was going on xD

You use quite a lot of this lateral transition like at 00:48 but I don't think it's always a good idea, there should be a movement in the first place to use this one imo.

From 1:03, you have a lot of static plan and too much lip synch which aren't really acurate, it's breaking the pace and that's a problem because it's the chorus part, where the pace should have been the strongest. Well it becomes better around 1:12.

So yeah, you should try to follow more the variations of the music and try to use your scenes at best to follow the rythm of the music.

Still a nice amv here so yeah! Good job man

As your fellow Vipertrix, good improvement man. You're really interesting nero team's boys

Anyway, be careful with the accelerations of your clips, often it was really too much, try to better manage them.

Good luck for the next!

Thx to all for the comment and support In fact I used those written too :(and at certain points I arranged with some scenes that centravano anything .. I'll be more careful next time, thanks again