Hey man ! so you did a collab with sempai^^ , nice collab
Track 1 : Some scenes were too long so the pace wasn't that good , he must hide the logo too because sometimes we see it , like at 00:40 00:42 : the mask was useless and too slow
Track 2 : Your zooms in/out were too strong and sometimes too fast ^^ try to make them smoother xD You used many times the transition of the leaf ^^ try to change , i mean the other transitions were good , i only had a problem with this one
I think that's all for me ^^ overall i like it , but i had a problem with the music , it wasn't that good , well it's only my taste^^ so don't care about it if you want :p
Good job , see ya for the next one
Kyoroichi Ambassadeur
Messages : 523 Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012 Age : 28 Localisation : Trinidad
I liked the first track, it was good overalls, well yeah maybe you are missing some synch but it didn't really bug me. The second track wasn't that good though. And the transition between the two of them was really poor done, the colors of each part were just too different, I think it wouldn't have been a bad idea to add color correction to the FMA part to match with the colors of Kprojet better.
So yeah, there were some odd rolling transitions, because they were going in a different direction than the move just before. The cam moves could be smoother and more accurate. The masks or chromi I'm not sure at some parts weren't really clean, or at least there was too much of the same transition. And wtf with the colo at 1:32? xD So yeah there were some nice transitions (though I feel like it's always the same with those openings) but a lot of them could be improved in term of cleanliness and fluidity.
See you to the next!
Kyoroichi Ambassadeur
Messages : 523 Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012 Age : 28 Localisation : Trinidad
Hey I didnt like this collab Mask in part 1 is not really clean part 2 i didnt like the zooms + there are no rythme in your video anyway good luck see u next time
As I said on youtube, it's a really nice collab, good job to u
Kyoroichi Ambassadeur
Messages : 523 Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012 Age : 28 Localisation : Trinidad
Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Mar 1 Jan - 1:48
Thanks again
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
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Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Mar 1 Jan - 19:02
Not bad, but I think the music doesn't fit really well the animes you used.
Otherwise, you're always editing I see
Kyoroichi Ambassadeur
Messages : 523 Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012 Age : 28 Localisation : Trinidad
Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Mar 1 Jan - 19:38
haha I try to be as active as possible thanks again adrien
Satsumayu Ancien Combattant SNK
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Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Jeu 3 Jan - 19:13
I didn't really like those anime with that kind of music (I wasn't expecting fighting on this music). But it was still a nice AMV There where some technical mistakes, but they were already pointed out by MDl , I especially didn't like the fast dezooms at the end, and the weird chromi at 1:52
Sidus Luceo Suceur de nouilles
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Sujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Mer 9 Jan - 23:09