[EST] [Breaker&Light] Skeet

A new collab with Breaker! Please be gentle
his tracks: Nurarihyon no mago, katanagatari, gintama, deadman wonderland
my tracks: one piece, dragonball z, soul eater, hunter x hunter

COOOOOOOL!!! Improvement , improvement , improvement ! And breaker is your bro , am i wrong? ^^

I think you really improved , both of you , well done!! I can't write a big comment right now because i'm a little busy right now (ah...these days...)

To sum up , i would say good job , even if there are many mistakes that can be corrected , but you're in the right way , i'll write a more detailed comment if i get some time.

KEEP IT UP!!

thx man, and yeah he is my bro

merci monsieur

Good improvement from you both, here's my opinion haha you don't have to take it seriously you can wait for the pro people to comment like MDL xD

Part 1 - 0:00 - 0:09 - In my opinion it lacked rhythm at times but it was noticable what you were trying to do ^^ also did not like the fades I saw.

Part 2 - Nice part but at times I think it lacked rhythm again and some transitions were choppy but still not bad.

Part 3 - Liked this part a lot but just a minor problem at 1:06 - 1:08 with the blue flash

Part 4 & Part 5 - Liked these 2 parts a lot as well except the gintama dragon ball z scene haha

Part 6 & Part 7 - 2:03 and forward lacks atmosphere and pace in my opinion, a little too plain for this part in the music but in part 7, I saw effort for internal sync its a pass haha but still lacks atmosphere.

Part 8 - Don't like this one too much, weirdlyned at times and the flashes you used at points were a bit uncalled for.

But overall enjoyed, really nice improvement !!
Can't wait for your next !!
P.S Light pede hahaha

yeah thx curissu-kun and i'm not the one who hits on jeremy, you are

Hey!

Overall it was nice even it sometimes it could be better in terms of rythm and editing (I'm thinking about some of your transitions whit masks which could be better..)

But, You improved! I'm waiting for your next project Good luck!

Merci monsieur Echo

Mdrr no prob'!

Hi guys!

It was not bad but nothing really more. Since I've edited this song, I thought it was a bit slow overall (or maybe I'm the one who edits too fast ) I also thought some animes didn't fit so much nor together neither with the song. But let's see it in track per track.

Track Nura: The overlays looked a bit blurry and not very well implemented, another compositing mode could have fit better. The synch felt a bit off but it's a hard part to deal with. Be careful with the transitions as most of them weren't really clean and they didn't fit so well the colors of the scenes.

Track One Piece: This one reminds me so much of "Don't Give Up" xD Ok first the scenes are stretched, you had to crop the 4:3 sources to make them look like 16:9 before resizing them. Well same critics for the synch and the overlays. The masks are better but the one around 0:41 didn't work for me, because the lateral move isn't really natural, the blue sky doesn't fit with the red just before and the finish of this scene goes from luffy who's like watching luffy, it doesn't work, you should have changed of character.

Track Katagatari: This anime has not much to do here imo xD But anyways, the part was ok, a bit slow maybe but no big problems I guess.

Track Dragon Ball: The transition with katanagatari was quite hard xD Expected. I liked this part, the impacts were nice, it was well done overall, maybe the cam moves in the sky were a bit rough so be careful with that.

Track Gintama: Really nice too, it's like you're becoming to understand the song better and better The rythm is cool here, no big problems, maybe just the mask at 1:49, the scene is too dark to make a mask just like that.

Track Soul Eater: It was an okay track, I know this part of the song is a hell though. Well it was not bad but nothing really interesting.

Track Deadman Wonderland: More or less the same than the Soul eater, it was okay but it's mostly what we're used to see with Deadman Wonderland, with some scenes which were a bit long imo (like 2:27 even though the synch afterwards with this scene was cool)

Track Hunter x Hunter: I thought the overlays and masks were quite draft, looked like the edges were blurry. Okay track, but as a final I thought the scenes didn't fit so well, like "how Hisoka vs Kastro is shonen anyways?" But maybe it's just my taste

Anyways, good job to both of you and keep it up! You're becoming stronger

Very nice, though it lacked a few things. To me it appeared slow and at some places the anime didn't fit well with the song. This sort of reminds me of MDL's video. Overall it was pretty good & enjoyable some parts made me laugh.

je ne suis pas assez fort en AMVs pour faire des critiques constructives mais je peut te dire que j'ai adoré !! vous avez fait du bon boulot tout les deux

thanx guys

I didn't really like the mix of animes, an I think the Soul Eater track lacked rythm , but apart from that it was pretty cool.
Nice job

thx Satsu

Very nice collab guys!

In my opinion is not bad but too slow compared to the song, and then the quality between a track and the other varied greatly and the mask were not exactly the best I agree with what he said MDL, good luck the next AMV

merci for all the comments :negro: