Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Sam 19 Jan - 21:23
a collab i made with the leader of my team ! ^^ him - Gintama, Ao No Ex, Kenichi, Naruto me - Bleach, Reborn, Code:Breaker, HxH
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Sam 19 Jan - 21:37
Hi
Not bad There were some nice parts but overall I didn't like that much how you manage the pace, it wasn't well defined. On a more technical side some transitions weren't fitting that much, like some masks on the reborn part or rolls on the code breaker to quote the most spottable ones. Ah and be careful with frame blending (wtf at 0:06 ) and bad ratio aspect on Reborn
On another hand you did a cool job with cam moves and scene selection was nice most of the time, well that's it: it's not bad but it can still be better
Good job to both of you, keep it up
L1ght Ambassadeur
Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Dim 20 Jan - 10:07
thx MDL i'll try to learn from my mistakes
irany Converti
Messages : 1243 Date d'inscription : 26/10/2011 Age : 35 Localisation : In your eyes
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Lun 21 Jan - 18:03
Hi,
This is not bad. There any way to improve it further. Already, there is too much zoom and dezoom. You do not vary enough your work or transitions.
You are on the right path. Keep it up!
L1ght Ambassadeur
Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Lun 21 Jan - 21:20
thanx man ^^
Invité Invité
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Lun 21 Jan - 22:34
Nice!!
L1ght Ambassadeur
Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Mar 22 Jan - 5:53
thanx ^^
RoxStar V.I.Phoenix
Messages : 475 Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : BELGIQUE!
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Mar 22 Jan - 22:09
not bad at all ^^ the transitions are good (not all but a lot are nice) gj but I don't rly like how you show your animes one after one (like a MEP) and you need to be more dynamique at the good time ^^
Echotrooper Sora to Kasai
Messages : 10579 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 35 Localisation : The City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Mer 23 Jan - 14:51
You're improving dude, there are some nice parts!
L1ght Ambassadeur
Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Mer 23 Jan - 21:37
thanks dudes
General-Guy Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 86 Date d'inscription : 10/12/2012 Age : 36
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Ven 25 Jan - 19:22
Kenichi (yeah,a rare anime in amvs! And one I really love!)?!?! And it was the best part for me too...but overall,like said, the rythm is not too good and with the whole instrumental repetitive bit, simple action can get old quite quick.
L1ght Ambassadeur
Messages : 544 Date d'inscription : 22/07/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Jump City
Sujet: Re: [Breaker&Light] Time To Let It Go Lun 28 Jan - 10:49