Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Dim 10 Nov - 5:26
Author: AlchemistEskimo: Production: Ellines Nakama Anime source: Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood Audio source: Sum 41- With Me Contest Participated in: ChroniTime IC (48 hours) Description: First time doing a solo IC so I'm surprised I even finished! It's got plenty of flaws but for a 2 day edit I'm rather happy with it. The story is nothing too complex just the bond between the Elric brothers and their struggle throughout the series. Download: www.sendspace.com/file/ojdg8l
PBE Sora to Kasai
Messages : 4353 Date d'inscription : 21/07/2010 Age : 33 Localisation : Du 29
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Dim 10 Nov - 7:08
Yo Alchemist.
I'm happy you're here, and imma let yo amv . But don't forget to go present yourself before.
HERE (it's just for common courtesy, i'll comment your video right after ! )
AlchemistEskimo Touriste
Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Dim 10 Nov - 7:35
PBE a écrit:
Yo Alchemist.
I'm happy you're here, and imma let yo amv . But don't forget to go present yourself before.
Thanks! Didn't mean to come across as rude :)I'll make an introduction now.
995Gabber Roseau Fringant
Messages : 40 Date d'inscription : 21/08/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Dubai
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Dim 10 Nov - 11:56
Dave meets PBE. the start of a great friendship! About the vid, I told you mate xD I love it with passion
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Dim 10 Nov - 22:33
Another FMA AMV ^^
Song cut at 00:34? :/
....at 1:17? :/ x2
Well , i think that the end was a little abrupt because of the song cut...it's a shame because the video wasn't bad ^^
Anyway not bad dude , good luck for the contest
AlchemistEskimo Touriste
Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Mar 12 Nov - 8:41
Draga a écrit:
Song cut at 00:34? :/ ....at 1:17? :/ x2
Well , i think that the end was a little abrupt because of the song cut.
Yeah the cuts were very much just so I could finish on time so they were pretty bad and not though out. I'll be sure to make more care with them in future projects! Anyways thanks for the opinion
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Mar 12 Nov - 14:50
Hello!
I found it quite interesting for an IC, there was quite a lot of work. Some parts were really well done but, on the contrary you also have some rough transitions. Those were also the reasons why I put you 3rd and not 2nd in my ranking (but it was quite a hot spot).
So yeah keep on taking risks and searching for ways to personalize your work. But be careful about the colors between your scenes and not to mask one character on the same character in background too.
Good job, nevertheless, congratz on your 3rd place!
Tricky Sora to Kasai
Messages : 2261 Date d'inscription : 31/05/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : Chez Adrien Heraud
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Mar 12 Nov - 15:42
Sum 41:heart:
Not bad for an IC, I liked it, gratz !
AlchemistEskimo Touriste
Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Mer 13 Nov - 16:41
MagicDarkLight a écrit:
But be careful about the colors between your scenes and not to mask one character on the same character in background too.
Good job, nevertheless, congratz on your 3rd place!
Thanks a lot for the critique! I really appreciate the feedback. Things like the point you made on the masking never even crossed my mind before :PAlso by colors between scenes do you mean changes from light to dark ect or something else?
Tricky a écrit:
Sum 41:heart: Not bad for an IC, I liked it, gratz !
Thank you! And Sum 41 are indeed the bomb.
PBE Sora to Kasai
Messages : 4353 Date d'inscription : 21/07/2010 Age : 33 Localisation : Du 29
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Falling - Eternal IC Ven 22 Nov - 20:04
i won,t make a big comm cause i agree with mdl/tricky.
just noticed a small lip flap on the green guy at 0:57.
that video was quite good. well deserved 3rd place.