Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sam 4 Jan - 13:31
Author: AlchemistEskimo Anime source(s):Durarara, Eden of the East, Fate Zero, Kara No Kyoukai, Darker Than Black Audio Source: From the Ground - Hollywood Undead Description: Well this was made for Eria teams 3 day Ic and I made this with the help of a dozen cups of coffee and no common sense. I decided to try and develop my crossover skills and use this concept for an Ic since it's pretty meh. The general idea is we have our drr cops chasing after a terroist who is attempting to blow up the city. Anyways hope you enjoy!
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Lun 6 Jan - 18:38
Hello!
That was an interesting idea for an IC, but I think it's exactly because of the IC that the crossover didn't work out so well. It does make sense in the end but you still have some action parts that look kinda out of the story.
For the editing part, some really nice techniques, your editing is still a bit shaky and bouncy with all those contrary cam moves and the transitions aren't really the best ones, but oh well. You had a concept to cope with.
So yeah it's nice, good job
AlchemistEskimo Touriste
Messages : 20 Date d'inscription : 10/11/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Australia
Sujet: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Ven 10 Jan - 14:46
Yeah the story began to come apart as realized I had no decent scenes left xD Anyway thanks a lot for the pointers and taking the time!