xDeuz - Lovers Out

Title: Lovers Out
Anime: Kara no Kyoukai, K-oN, To Aru Majutsu no Index, To Aru Majutsu no Index II, To Aru Kagaku no Railgun, To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
Song: Sanctuary
Artist: Daybreak Embrace
Duration: 03:15
Programs: After Effects
DD: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=195527



Comment: for the truth that is perhaps a bit better understood: The End is just the Beginning.
Certainly if possible I would like to hear the review of all from his point of view in order to continue to improve: D

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Hello, yes indeed I didn't get the end was the beginning haha

It was not bad at all, I enjoyed it, I didn't think I would see the hospital scenes of To aru used like this even though it looks pretty obvious now. However I'm a bit tired of seeing the same kara no kyoukai scene but yeah, not your fault I guess.

Storywise it was quite enjoyable and most of your masks were well done to show it. The editing wasn't bad too but I really felt slow plarts, sometimes your synch is a bit too approximative, for example the part at 1:17 feels really out of synch. At 1:02 there's also a big beat which should have been used imo. As for the last fight, I found it a bit underwhelming too (maybe here it's more about the camera, it's a bit too static in some scenes).

I want to add I thought there were way too many flash transitions in the calm parts, besides it's a really strong light so yeah, imo you should have used a more discreet one some times or just not use any light at all. And finally, you shouldn't make fades during strong cam moves like 0:53, 1:04, it looks a bit weird because it loads the screen more than it would normally.

Anyways, good job, there were some nice ideas here, with a little more solid editing I think you'll be able to make really cool stuff. Keep it up

thank you very much for the review MagicDarkLight.
insurance with those words I improve for my next job. I am looking for my storywise, as you described, thank you very much for having taken the time to see it, thank you very much
Greetings: D

I liked it! but it felt like I've already seen it.