Yolo peoples, this is my second work! Ill try to make something new, so yeah, hope you like it! Enjoy! Btw tell me my mistakes, i want some criticism from you!
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7153 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 31 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Hello! It's not bad at all, I enjoyed it, just be careful with the pace at the beginning it was a bit too fast and you have that weird zoom at 0:13, be more accurate. The colors in these ovas can be a bit fade so it would have been nice to add some contrast on the darkest scenes.
I'm looking forward to the next
Darthice Sora to Kasai
Messages : 542 Date d'inscription : 29/09/2012 Age : 27 Localisation : Belgique