Oh Jin!
The editing is really nice, but the video on the other hand as a whole felt weird. The beginning the feel of the video was going in the right path, but then in the second half it was going down into a monotonous sentimental feel when the music was giving off a happy feeling of joy. For a motion picture video everything went well, but it had a complete different feel from the music as if it was edit without music first then threw in the song after. I also would have liked it more if there were an main chr involved with this instead of several so overall I felt confused.
That's just my opinion about this, good job though!