Messages : 126 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2015 Age : 28 Localisation : Yato Planet
Sujet: [Level Up 2016] - Ojo No Ansatsu Mar 23 Aoû - 18:05
DigiCyber (Novice): Well, regardless of how hard it was to make this clip i'm still pretty glad & satisfied with the progress that i made , working with Noor on this clip was an incredible experience for me since i learned a lot of things about how to make a clear story & to improve more with my editing itself , as improving more with the basics most of all as well as the technical part as well , i wish if i had a bit more time to fix couple of things but it was a great experience for me to do this with such an incredible pro as Noor , i hope ye'll enjoy & understand this clip regardless of some probs that i had ^^
Noormuda (Pro): Being a pro isn't as easy as I thought it would be haha. but I had a great experience teaching Digi how to execute his thoughts through editing and what he needs to achieve that. but starting with an editor that is still new to the editing world was quite a challenge I have to admit, but seeing how digi was when he first started his project and now after he finished it makes me proud because there was a huge difference how he used to edit months ago and how he edits now. Digi had the motivation to change and prove it to everyone and I think his final product is great. I do think he leveled up during this project and I believe he will keep on leveling up until he reaches what he wants.
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Dernière édition par DigiCyber le Jeu 25 Aoû - 22:08, édité 1 fois
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Level Up 2016] - Ojo No Ansatsu Mar 23 Aoû - 18:26
Yo!
I agree with what Noor said, some things are still a bit rough around the edges but you improved a lot in pacing and narration in comparison with your JE project. I think you still have to improve your cam movements, for example at 1:44 the zoom in the eye is inconsistent and at 1:07 I think there are a bit too many of them, making the rhythm too wild for the song. Some masks are a bit too obvious as well but I guess that's what you mentioned in your description.
It's cool to see you made the most ot ouf this contest, nice level up! Keep it up, I liked it o/
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Messages : 81 Date d'inscription : 30/01/2016 Age : 28 Localisation : Romania
Sujet: Re: [Level Up 2016] - Ojo No Ansatsu Mar 23 Aoû - 18:26
Congrats for the entry and good luck in the contest You already know what I think about the video :3
HakuRyuu Vieux Brigand
Messages : 126 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2015 Age : 28 Localisation : Yato Planet
Sujet: Re: [Level Up 2016] - Ojo No Ansatsu Mer 24 Aoû - 15:27
MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Yo!
I agree with what Noor said, some things are still a bit rough around the edges but you improved a lot in pacing and narration in comparison with your JE project. I think you still have to improve your cam movements, for example at 1:44 the zoom in the eye is inconsistent and at 1:07 I think there are a bit too many of them, making the rhythm too wild for the song. Some masks are a bit too obvious as well but I guess that's what you mentioned in your description.
It's cool to see you made the most ot ouf this contest, nice level up! Keep it up, I liked it o/
thanks a lot for yer feedbacks , well as for the part starting 1:44 i was in a hurry & i've got about 2 weeks before the deadline to finish the part , i wanted to fix that problem as well as couple of other problems in the execution phase ( as well as some others in the other parts of the story ) but sadly i didn't got enough time :'( still i'm pretty much satisfied with the final outcome ^^ thanks again
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Congrats for the entry and good luck in the contest You already know what I think about the video :3