AMV | Memories [Kowarekake no Orgel]

This is an amv about the memories of Keichiro and Flower, hope you like it. Greetings

Name: Memories
Anime: Gekijouban Kowarekake no Orgel
Song: Rudiments of a spiritual life
Artist: The American Dollar
Duration: 2.48
Software: SV pro 10 || AE cs4 || PS cs6
Link Online: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izce_gGVcQU
DL: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=192917

Hi!

That's quite an unexpected anime for a solo, you managed to use this well. I think it was a nice amv but some flaws bothered me a little too much.

First, the biggest problem is that it's quite too linear, I mean when the song gets stronger we don't feel that in the vid. I know this anime must have been hard to edit but you could have used some stuff to make the end look stronger than the beginning. Also since the beginning had rougher cam moves it felt quite too fast for the song at some parts. Imo some of your cam moves needed more frames, don't hesitate to make them look smoother if your song's calm.

Some of your effects aren't clean enough, these cookie cutter thingie at 2:35 for example just seemed to float on the screen, it has a taste of old school and not for the best imo. Also, be careful with the overdose of fades, it doesn't look really clean either (for example around 0:45 - 0:50).

But you created a nice atmosphere with an original anime and it was overall well edited so I liked it, good job man, keep it up

Thanks mdl , I'll remember for the next vídeo. i'm glad you liked it  

On the technical aspect, I didn't really like the white transition at 0:50,the transition at 0:56 (too many superpositions at the same time), or the cookie cutter at 2:35.

And I think the choice of scene around 1:39 (when the music changes) could have been better.

But overall there was a nice athmosphere, you did a good job on this anime (it looks like it's not very dynamic ^^)