The Destiny of 7 Dragon Slayers - False Pretense

info: Hey! Here is one of my new AMV, please comment how it looks, thanks  
Anime: Fairy Tail
Música: False Pretense - The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
DDL Enlace: Sorry but no download link  

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MagicDarkLight a écrit:

Hello, before we comment, please introduce yourself in a new thread there: https://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/f1-presentation

Thanks you  

Ready now I did the presentation
https://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/t3296-presentation-i-am#115043

Hi ,
So a first technical detail that bothered me: the lip flaps.
Iit's always disturbing to have a character talking when it should not .
Then about the transitions, you should try to diversify them a bit more: for example, you used the horizontal swipe transition a lot,
especially when sometimes it wasn't really logic with respect to the flow of
the scenes.
You also used some black flash transitions, but I think there were too short (more
like a cut transition actually) and it would probably be better if they were faded.

And finally I think overall the pace was inconsistant; I mean some times it was
good, but there was also some moments were it could have followed the music better (0:09 for example).