It clearly deserved the final. That's a pity. Now to talk about the amv in itself, I think it had a lot of room for improvement in the effects. They're enjoyable but too approximative, the masks have edges, the texts and eyes are too saturated, the HUD are a bit cheap etc. Also your overall color corrections were too monochrome.
The editing, despite being good, suffered from the colors and appeared more linear than it actually is. But yeah, the bottom line is scene selection could have been more varied.
So yeah, I liked it but I think it could have been more interesting.