Messages : 6841 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 25 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Fobos] Shattered Heaven Sam 25 Avr - 12:34
Hey!
I liked it, the association was unexpectedly very nice. What bugged me off the most were your cam moves, they are really rough and not very accurate and that's messing up your pace. The most striking example is around 1m00, I understand you wanted to synch on the bass but it's just too much for a calm part, in the end we don't feel concerned by the chorus after this because your pace was already high before. 1:55 was much better in this regard. On a side note, you should be careful with the edges of your masks, I know it's an IC but it can be disturbing to see them, to the very least, it's not looking clean.
But yeah, despite all that, there's a nice atmosphere here, it's been a while since I've seen something on this fight and I enjoyed it, good job