[Kyoroichi - NT] Broken Past

Anime - Sword of the Stranger
Music - Monty I Are - The Stand
DL Link - http://www.mediafire.com/?ba2smfliy77j315
http://nero-team.1fr1.net/

Trés belle réalisation.
Un trés bon rythme très bien adapté aux images.
En général un bon AMV, cependant, sur les passages d'action on perd parfois le fil de l'image notamment à 0:19 et 0:26.

Reste une trés belle création.
Bonne continuation.
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thank you
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I don't really like it , especially because i edited with this song , i know it very well , i mean it was nice but there are some problems^^

00:03 the glow wasn't that clean , try to avoid effects like that or flashes in the calm parts :p

00:34 not really clean

1:04 the song cut wasn't good T_T

1:54 you have already used this scene^^

Sometimes , the glow used isn't that clean , so it make it ugly , try to use more Brightness/contrast than glow.
Some action parts weren't that dynamic and were a little boring like at 1:32 especially with a song like this ^^

Well overall i think it's good even it could have been better , but i think that there wasn't a lot of good scenes with this anime , so you should have done it shorter , this is only my opinion ^^ keep it up dude !

thanks for the critique

Np dude

Yop!

Didin't really like it dude, I'm pretty sure you can do way better than this!

I mean it's not terrible but there is clearly a lack of rythm (some clips are really too long), it's not clean enough (some glows, some fades in the action parts, audio cuts) and it lacks some "interesting" transitions.

That's all, to sum up, it's ok but you can do way more.

I saw that you joined the Level Up! Hope to see a great work from you, good luck!

merci and yea i did hope i do good too xD

Hey!
Sorry but I didn't really like it this time, I've edited this song too and imo you totally failed your audio cuts xDD it was a bad first step, then I think the video lacked in dynamism with too long scenes, sometimes they're too static too.
Well yeah, I'll just repeat Echo's opinion, too much fades, not enough relevant use of the scenes to make transitions.. The masks weren't well chosen, you have to be cleaner on this too.

But yeah overalls, the end was better I think, well, sorry man but I'm sure you can do better! See you to the next

thanks mdl and yes i know i can do better, i maybe took about 4-5hours to make this one but ill try harder next time xD thanks for your critique though!