[Light&Madman] Past Time Has No Meaning

a small collab i made with a friend of mine
his part : Naruto
my part: HxH

Hey!

Ok I will only comment your part, I'll just say your friend should get rid of those texts it really wasn't a good idea to use such common police like that...

Your part is much better than the first one, it's not bad, there are some good movements. My complaints will be the mask at 0:57, you should avoid masking the same character as in the background, it doesn't look good. Be careful also about the abuse of zoom/dezoom because sometimes you break your movements by not following one direction.

From 1:08 I think the synch could have been better but it's ok.

Well I think you have quite progressed, it's good, I wonder what a full amv of you can be now

MagicDarkLight a écrit:

Hey!

Ok I will only comment your part, I'll just say your friend should get rid of those texts it really wasn't a good idea to use such common police like that...

Your part is much better than the first one, it's not bad, there are some good movements. My complaints will be the mask at 0:57, you should avoid masking the same character as in the background, it doesn't look good. Be careful also about the abuse of zoom/dezoom because sometimes you break your movements by not following one direction.

From 1:08 I think the synch could have been better but it's ok.

Well I think you have quite progressed, it's good, I wonder what a full amv of you can be now

+1.

Seriously, you really improved! I'm Happy for you, now go ahead in this way, and yeah, you should try to make a full amv!

wow thx guys ^^ it means a lot to me

like Echo Say Ur part is good you improved but u should make some fulls amv and participate in contests good luck for u

thx ^^

I commented on it tomorrow;)

same as those who commented before, i'll just add that a minor red filter fade when you dezoom for the moon could have maybe made a more immersive transition.

besides that, hard to comment on such a short track in a same "episode moment", but it can lead to good things.

up to the next

The track HxH is too darck next to the other one it 's too differant for me

The transi moon can be beter but it's ok

thx

Yep, your track is really good. You could have just changed the colors a little, so that it fits the naruto track better (because the transition between the tracks isn't very good colorwise )
I hope to see a full amv next time ^^

thx ^^

Yo
Bon Me, I will not make a com 'super detailed because I think that this kind of AMV is really seen too much and I can not see the top interest! After if you like it that's your choice, I will prevent anything =).

I find the more HxH Track worked, even if cropping a bit crappy.
The Naruto is clean but now, there are a lot of not very Opening worked then flash black mark where sync is not very clean.

It is also short for DUO at the next;).

thx akuzo ^^