Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: [Kisagi] I don't want any breasts Lun 23 Sep - 7:32
A little IC I did last week just trying out somethings and since I haven't edited in a while. For this the theme is simple and you can probably tell when I decided to rush.
MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai
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Sujet: Re: [Kisagi] I don't want any breasts Lun 23 Sep - 19:16
Hey!
Too perverted for me, To Love Darkness really went too far But except for that I kinda liked it until you rushed it (yep the end is definitely rushed). What disturbed me the most was when you used text directly on the scenes, I think you should have used plain-colored texts instead. The AE part was quite cool but it needed some more to feel like it was really part of the amv and not just to show off
Nevertheless good job on the first part, that was enjoyable
Kisagi Vieux Brigand
Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: Re: [Kisagi] I don't want any breasts Mar 24 Sep - 0:33
Thank you!
PBE Sora to Kasai
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Sujet: Re: [Kisagi] I don't want any breasts Mar 24 Sep - 3:33
MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hey! The AE part was quite cool but it needed some more to feel like it was really part of the amv and not just to show off
THIS.
I'm kinda sick and tired of these "AE text lyrics sequences". I personnaly think it doesn't try a ton of relevance in a amv, unless you go 100% on it like Dressin'up, then use line art and morphs to make interesting transitions, or you do like cololor and try to use many layers while playing with your texts/images. but you obviously haven't used it to make it something unique and not seen everywhere... i'll blame it on the IC, but i hope you won't do it on the next serious one.
p.s: dat title
Kisagi Vieux Brigand
Messages : 231 Date d'inscription : 03/04/2013 Age : 27 Localisation : Gifu, Japan
Sujet: Re: [Kisagi] I don't want any breasts Mar 24 Sep - 4:08
PBE a écrit:
I'm kinda sick and tired of these "AE text lyrics sequences". I personnaly think it doesn't try a ton of relevance in a amv, unless you go 100% on it like Dressin'up, then use line art and morphs to make interesting transitions, or you do like cololor and try to use many layers while playing with your texts/images. but you obviously haven't used it to make it something unique and not seen everywhere... i'll blame it on the IC, but i hope you won't do it on the next serious one.
Yeah I usually don't like them either, but just wanted to try it for once. I don't really plan on using text again in this type of video unless it is something like Squall(c) - summert!me and if I want to try something like that. Though I'll take on your advice^^