sadly i didn't quite picture the story well at first screening. and as MDL said, editing is mega-slow, which fits kinda the song, but you have very static moments like 1:21 (grayscale girl frame). maybe you just have a "still foreground, moving background" just like in Qwaqa's Time (even if the source is like that, you can make it fairly easily). simple mask and traveling but it adds a bit of movement.
as a personnal opinion, you seems to have enough time to edit and try things, but you don't put much focus on your projects. even if it bores you a lot, maybe you should try to produce by changing the music. i'll explain: for example, if you plan to make "only masks/rotos" in a day, you can put an OST or an album you like who will be different of what you edit, it changes the mood a lot. doing 2 amvs at a time can be as effective for that too since you change the environnment and work on it. Maybe that could help you keeping more long projects.
Akross is coming. show what you can really do :gardienSTK: