I had to make an entire profile just to comment on this, but since it's my favorite anime it was worth it
I liked the AMV 60% i would say, there were some nice masks and compositions in the beginning, but i've been wathcing you from a long time but i felt that this AMV was not you, and i agree with MDL when it comes to the editing point of view, but i would add the 1:56 missed beats where there should be some tention, imo it's a build up scene which you left static, and also the drop was pretty boring.
There were lots of statics scenes and lyncs that had really didn t connect at all, and i perfectly understand that the anime is not easy to edit but i think you've edited harder animes than this and worked them out.
When i think about your edits i always have Kansei, Phantom Thieves and (ESPECIALLY) YohRa in my mind, and i can't even compare those edits with Adora Burst, it's like different editors edited them.
Hopefully you have in plan just as me, to make a second season AMV with it and will see you at maximum potential, the anime has a lot of potential and i know you could do some really great stuff with it.