First of all, you have a lot of blending frames, I think you didn't agree on a fps. Apart from that it was ok overall, some transitions were really good but you also have a lot of fades and weird masks which didn't connect in terms of light or colors. I also felt that the impacts could have been stronger, the synch is too approximative sometimes and your effects could be cleaner too. Also the slow part at the end needed calmer scenes than that, you still make rough transitions in a fading away part, that's a bit wrong.
But yeah, that was enjoyable, but at the same time there were too many flaws here. Good job nevertheless