Not bad at all, good ideas here and there and you don't hezitate to use different techniques. However you abuse of zoom outs, especially in the first part, it can get a bit repetitive. Worse, you overuse fading to black which makes the viewer lose sight of the pace and atmosphere.
That's my main complaint, some of your cam moves can get a bit messy too like at 1:04 you zoom out then zoom in a random place, that's not really clean cam management. But yeah the real issue are the black fades overdose that hide a better editing underneath.
Good job nevertheless, keep it up o/