Messages : 7152 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mar 30 Juil - 5:20
Hi Nikos!
There are good and bad things in your amv, some parts, especially the last were quite okay but on the beginning we have many flashes and masks which didn't quite fit. When you make a mask you should ask yourself whether it can make a good transition or if you can use it to add something more to the scene, don't mask just because it looks like you made an effort: it can quickly becomes a fail.
So yeah for the next one try to be cleaner, keep up to the basics, a good rythm, good synch with a good impact in your scenes when needed, and a smooth editing. It's quite useless to develop more since it's a pretty old work so I'm waiting for your next one
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mar 30 Juil - 6:49
+1 MDL , making a mask doesn't mean it´s good , and many people on youtube think like that ( i don't Mean you ) " oh there are a lot of masks , awesome!" But it´s not always true , a mask have to be useful (i won't say more than that because MDL already made it clear)
And this is way too old ^^ we're waiting your new project , then we'll comment as it should be ( i'm taking especially about myself )
Anyway , it's not bad , but i think now you can do better , good luck
Nikos150 Touriste
Messages : 5 Date d'inscription : 29/07/2013
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mar 30 Juil - 11:52
i know what you mean and i know i made a lot of mistakes in this video that right now i would have made differently...i started editting again 1-2 weeks ago and i am preparing a good project and that's why as i said in the introduction i am looking for a beta tester because i want a really good result
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mar 30 Juil - 19:18
Yeah np , i can help you if you want :p
Nikos150 Touriste
Messages : 5 Date d'inscription : 29/07/2013
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mer 31 Juil - 0:50
that would be great, you can give me your info to contact you, i wanna finish the first 30 seconds and then i can send it to you and you can tell me your opinion??
Draga Converti
Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 31 Localisation : France/Tunisie
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mer 31 Juil - 6:51
I send you a PM ( on this forum ) :p
Crookz Vieux Brigand
Messages : 122 Date d'inscription : 15/11/2012 Age : 32
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Mer 31 Juil - 11:49
I still enjoy this video even today. you know where you went wrong nikos and I'm sure you learn't from this.
Satsumayu Ancien Combattant SNK
Messages : 697 Date d'inscription : 20/08/2011 Age : 31 Localisation : Les crêpes. La pluie.
Sujet: Re: One piece full amv (diamond eyes) Dim 4 Aoû - 19:29
Like said above, you should use masks when it's useful, and try to avoid to make them too "visible" (for example try to keep similar colors).
The texts in the beginning could have been done better, but I think it was a nice idea.
Apart from that, the pacing was okay. Good luck for yout next project ; )