Yooo
This is so cool, you used the anime to remake the story of the manga XD I really liked it, way more than the first Unravel because of the song mainly but you also were better with your puppet effects and such. The pace and synch were really good as usual.
Some things still bothered me a bit, I think the texts weren't as esthetic as they could have been, they are too all over the place and as for the first one I still think your fonts don't always represent the atmosphere so well. Also, I get that homogeneity is important but be careful not to be too plain with your color scheme, here it was a bit too monotone, I'm not telling to add blue scenes in a full red amv but more contrasts would have been good at some points (besides everybody does that with TG).
But really cool TG amv, good job man!